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When I was a child, there was a popularity on a toy among childeren.

It used to be sold in supermarkets.

It cosists of a small plastic can and a sillicon insect toy.

It could be bigger if I put some water over and over.

It was like raising an insect.

I bought it in a supermarket near my home.

After arriving at home I began pouring water in it.

And I made the toy bigger and felt satisfied with raising .

But I was getting nervous because I didn't let my mom know about buying the toy.

So I brought it back to the supermarket to get refund.

I lied I didn't use it.

But the cashier noticed it was used. It was too embarrased to forget the situation and the atmoshere of that day.

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Answer 1

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When I was a child, there was a popular toy among children.

It used to be sold in supermarkets.

It consisted of a small plastic can and an insect toy made of silicone.

The toy could grow bigger when I added water repeatedly.

It was like raising an insect.

I bought it at a supermarket near my house.

After arriving home, I began pouring water into it.

I made the toy bigger and felt satisfied with raising it.

But I started getting nervous because I hadn't told my mom about buying the toy.

So, I took it back to the supermarket to get a refund.

I lied and said I hadn't used it.

But the cashier noticed it had been used. I was too embarrassed to forget the situation and the atmosphere of that day.

Answer 2

안녕하세요. 손용준 전문가입니다.

When I was a child, there was a populari toy among childeren.

It used to be sold in supermarkets.

It was cosisted of a small plastic can and a sillicon insect toy.

It could be bigger if I fill some water over and over again in it.

It was like raising an insect.

I bought it in a supermarket near my home.

After arriving home I began pouring water in it.

And I made the toy bigger and felt satisfied with raising it.

But I was getting nervous because I didn't let my mom know that I boght the toy.

So I brought it back to the supermarket to get refund.

I lied I didn't use it.

But the cashier noticed it was used. It was too embarrased to forget the situation and the atmoshere of that day.