영어 문법적으로 괜찮을까요????

Question

중3이고영어 수행평가 봐야하는데 학원을 옮기느라 잠시 그만둔 상태입니다. 아래 조건에 맞춰서 작성해야 하는데 문법적으로 오류가 있는지 확인해주신다면 감사하겠습니다 ㅠㅠㅠ

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1.과거완료 문법, 분사구문 문법 1회씩 사용

2.한 문장에 10단어 이상, 주어 동사를 완전히 갖춘 문장일 것

3.6문장 이상일 것

4.80단어 이상 100단어 이내일 것

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Answer 1

The two scenes that stayed most clearly in my memory were intense.

The first was in Chapter 8, where Ram found that soldier Balwant Singh had hanged himself.

I chose it because the book showed the cruelty of war vividly, and I felt that if I had been Ram, I would have been terrified.

The second was in Chapter 9, when Ram spilled tea on Ahmed’s mail and learned that he was a killer.

Having shown Ahmed as a kind man before, the book completely surprised me.

After I had finished the book, realizing how slow I was, I decided to study English harder to read more difficult novels.